It's not, though. Sorry. Good for the first go.
Needs a lot of work. Seems too familiar to keep me entertained. Feels like it is just watered down Skrillex. Maybe add some original beats between bridges?
I like what you did here, but the quality kills it. You should do concerts though. I'd tip/buy tickets if they were 2 or 3 dollars. I really like the lyrics.
I'm looking to perform live more...problem is forming a band. I've had bad luck with other musicians flaking on me. As to quality here, well, I recorded this at 3 am in my basement while trying not to wake the family. I'd like to redo my vocals. Maybe at a later date.
Nice Desert Sound mixed with James Bond
mate james bond wasn't ballin with me when i wrote this
I'm making a low qual video for this
Lemme know if you want to see it when it is done.
'Twas a decent presentation. Granted, I would update the meta-tags on it so it can be found more easily in the search system. Perhaps linking back to the original track here on Newgrounds would also be a good idea, eh? :)
At any rate, I'm very glad that you really enjoyed this track! Thanks a lot for the great review! :)
May I use this for an anime intro? I'd have words thrown in (simple words: "one, two three. fall........ Downfall..... Downfall.... cuz in the end we all fall down."
Yes if you want ^^,
I'm happy someone want to use one of my song!
Thanks for te 10!
at second 10-14 you have a great oppurtunity to expand into a tertiary line of melody to expand, but its good as a loop too. always nice to see flexible tunes.
Yeah I felt that too, ill work on it man :)
You are right. It is missing something. Perhaps it is too much background, and the background is to plain. Lower the base, and an occasional inversion to your strings... I dunno. Add a wind instrument, maybe? between :50 and 1:10 it sounds better. My imagination I thought, but no. There's definately a third element.
Thanks for the review i'll take that into consideration, and I completely agree with you, there is definately a third element.
At the time I had a failure to comprehend music volume variation.
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