Etomocky's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[{[Earth Paradise]}]

Request

May I use this for an anime intro? I'd have words thrown in (simple words: "one, two three. fall........ Downfall..... Downfall.... cuz in the end we all fall down."

XELAPA responds:

Yes if you want ^^,
I'm happy someone want to use one of my song!
Thanks for te 10!

[Retro game Menu loop]

nice

at second 10-14 you have a great oppurtunity to expand into a tertiary line of melody to expand, but its good as a loop too. always nice to see flexible tunes.

DJ-Corey-X responds:

Yeah I felt that too, ill work on it man :)

[red lamp]

Hmm, yeah...

You are right. It is missing something. Perhaps it is too much background, and the background is to plain. Lower the base, and an occasional inversion to your strings... I dunno. Add a wind instrument, maybe? between :50 and 1:10 it sounds better. My imagination I thought, but no. There's definately a third element.

mcrudeboi responds:

Thanks for the review i'll take that into consideration, and I completely agree with you, there is definately a third element.
At the time I had a failure to comprehend music volume variation.