Etomocky's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Winter Approaches]

You nailed your goal. Very wintry with no cliche holiday tones.

SentinalMusicInc responds:

Why thank you! I am sick of the overused holiday-themed music, so I decided, hey, why not just make a simple wintery themed song to use for the Winter season, right?

[Human Nature]

I like what you did here, but the quality kills it. You should do concerts though. I'd tip/buy tickets if they were 2 or 3 dollars. I really like the lyrics.

Ceevro responds:

I'm looking to perform live more...problem is forming a band. I've had bad luck with other musicians flaking on me. As to quality here, well, I recorded this at 3 am in my basement while trying not to wake the family. I'd like to redo my vocals. Maybe at a later date.

[{[Earth Paradise]}]

Request

May I use this for an anime intro? I'd have words thrown in (simple words: "one, two three. fall........ Downfall..... Downfall.... cuz in the end we all fall down."

XELAPA responds:

Yes if you want ^^,
I'm happy someone want to use one of my song!
Thanks for te 10!

[Retro game Menu loop]

nice

at second 10-14 you have a great oppurtunity to expand into a tertiary line of melody to expand, but its good as a loop too. always nice to see flexible tunes.

DJ-Corey-X responds:

Yeah I felt that too, ill work on it man :)

[red lamp]

Hmm, yeah...

You are right. It is missing something. Perhaps it is too much background, and the background is to plain. Lower the base, and an occasional inversion to your strings... I dunno. Add a wind instrument, maybe? between :50 and 1:10 it sounds better. My imagination I thought, but no. There's definately a third element.

mcrudeboi responds:

Thanks for the review i'll take that into consideration, and I completely agree with you, there is definately a third element.
At the time I had a failure to comprehend music volume variation.